Question

2．假如你的名字叫Lisa，你的笔友Tara上周来信向你倾述了她在班上学习成绩很好，但朋友很少，感到孤独的烦恼，并向你寻求帮助．请你根据提示给她写封回信，给她以帮助．
1写作要点提示：
1）简述Tara的烦恼；
2）针对她的烦恼提出几点建议；
3）表达你对她的鼓励与祝愿．
2写作要求：
信的内容应包含所提示的要点，语言要流畅，可围绕提示要点适当增加情节，以使信的意思连贯；信的词数90词左右；信的开头和结尾已写出，但不计入总词数，也不得抄入
答题卡．
Dear Tara
I got your letter last week．
                                                               
Yours
Lisa．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
You should help the students who are in trouble，both in study and in life你应该帮助处于麻烦中的学生，在学习上和生活上．
who are in trouble是定语从句，who是关系词，students是先行词．
【高分句型二】
I hope you can make more friends and become happy我希望你能有更多的朋友变得开心．
hope后是省略了that的宾语从句．

解答 Dear Tara，
I got your letter last week．I hear that you do very well in all the subjects．Congratulations！But you have few friends．You feel lonely．You don't know what you should do．（简述Tara的烦恼；）I give some advice：
First，you should help the students who are in trouble，both in study and in life．【高分句型一】They think you can get on well with them．
Then，join them．You can play，sing with them．Doing that can make you a member of them．
Last，after class，you can talk with them．Share the sadness and happiness with them（几点建议）
I hope you can make more friends and become happy．【高分句型二】（鼓励与祝愿）
Yours，
Lisa

点评 本题在写作时，要特别注意几种情况的描述，不能逐句翻译，同时要根据提示有效灵活的构思，恰当使用逻辑词语，让文章显得有条理，不杂乱．