题目内容
假设你叫张华,最近从报纸上得知美国某公司将在你的家乡建一座工厂,请你给该公司写封电子邮件。要点如下:
1. 表示欢迎:有利于家乡发展等;
2. 表示担忧:造成环境污染等;
3.希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息。要求:1.不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
2.词数80〜100(邮件的开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数)。
题型分析:此次写作是写一封自己向某公司了解情况的电子邮件,故要使用第一人称,时态多用一般现在时和一
般将来时。
行文思路:此次写作可从三方面来行文,对某公司在自己家乡建工厂欢迎—担忧—想了解环保措施。具体内容可以适当发挥,如有利于家乡发展、能提供更多工作岗位(欢迎); 是否会制造噪音、污染环境(担忧);请求对环保措施给予解释(想了解环保措施)。
高分点拨:此次写作不可逐句翻译,可使用learn that…,be glad at…,be sure …,be good for…,provide ... with …,be worried about that…,know whether..., would you please…等句式以使行文更加流畅。
佳作展示:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm a middle school student.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours, Zhang Hua
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm a middle school student. Recently I have learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory in my hometown. I'm glad at that. I'm sure that it's good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. However, some of us are worried about that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment in my hometown. So I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.
Would you please offer us more information about it?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours, Zhang Hua