Question

书面表达 (共1小题 ； 满分20分)

不以规矩，难成方圆。生活中总会有这样或者那样地规定。我们学校也有许多规定。

其中：1、学生每天必须穿校服上学。

不许化妆(make up)、不许打耳洞、男生不许留长发。

不许带手机上学。

4、……

请用80-100字谈谈你对此校规的看法。

Answer 1

We need a school policy

Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards. Life is always full of all kinds of rules, so does our school. For example, students must wear uniforms to go to school everyday. In some school, students are not allowed to make up, pierce ears and boys can not wear long hairs. Nowadays, some more new school rules are added to the school policies. For instance, students can not bring phones to school. What’s more, for some strict school, students are not allowed to go outside without a note and so on.

In my opinion, school policy is a necessity for the students. It can help students get rid of some bad habits and regulate their own behaviors and. Besides, it can help create a strong school atmosphere for students to study. In a word, we need a school policy.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如: Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards，无规矩不成方圆；create a strong school atmosphere创造浓厚的叙述氛围等，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。