Question

【题目】书面表达

如今，中学生的学习时间长，压力大。上周你班学生对如何减压放松进行了讨论。大家提出了许多种减压放松的方法。请你以“How to Get Relaxed”为题，写一篇短文。

要求：1. 短文必须包括以上要点，并谈谈自己的看法；2. 词数80左右，文章题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

How to Get Relaxed

Last week we had a discussion about the ways to get relaxed. ________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】How to Get Relaxed

Last week we had a discussion about the ways to get relaxed. We got a lot of ways to relax such as playing sports, listening to music, seeing films, traveling and communicating with parents and friends.

In my opinion, the best way to relax is playing sports. Many of us stay in the classroom almost the whole day without any exercise, which is bad for our health and also makes us feel blue. Therefore, we should exercise every day to keep a balance between study and sports.

【解析】

这是一篇话题作文，要求将讨论出的减压方式表述出来，并发表自己的看法．首先列出所提供的减压的方法，然后谈谈自己认为的最好的减压方法。主要用一般过去时、一般现在时，第一人称。表达上周我们的讨论用一般过去时，表达我的观点时用一般现在时，写作过程中，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型】

Many of us stay in the classroom almost the whole day without any exercise, which is bad for our health and also makes us feel blue.

我们很多人几乎一整天都呆在教室里不运动，这对我们的健康有害，也让我们感到忧郁。

which is bad for our health and also makes us feel blue.是由which 引导的非限制性定语从句。