Question

【题目】书面表达

在你的成长过程中，母亲会给你的一生带来很大的影响，请根据表格中的提示向读者介绍你的母亲，具体要求如下：

年龄	40
职业	过去是工人；现在是当地公司的秘书；
性格	工作高标准； 自信、勤奋(举一例) 有时有点幽默；
兴趣爱好	有时弹钢琴，工作与爱好间获得平衡； 常听古典音乐，因有持久价值；
最喜爱的颜色	绿色，因为……（至少两点）
我的感受	充满爱心，良师益友，…… (至少一点)

注意：

1．表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2．词数100左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。

3．表达中请勿提及真实校名及本人姓名。

My mother has influenced me a lot since I was born. _______________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】My mother has influenced me a lot since I was born .She is 40 years old. She used to be a worker. Now she is a secretary of a local company.

She works to high standards. She is confident and hard-working. She always does extra work. Sometimes she is a little humorous. She loves green because it’s an energetic colour. It represents new life because it is the colour of nature.

She likes playing the piano in her free time. She always achieves a balance between work and hobbies. She often listens to classical music because it has a lasting value.

I think my mother has a heart full of love. She is not only my good teacher but also my good friend. I have learnt a lot from her. I love her very much

【解析】

本文属于材料作文，介绍你的母亲。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如used to, standard, a little, represent, free time, between...and..., because, a heart full of love以及not only...but also等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。