Question

11．请以"My favourite school life"为题写一篇英语短文．
要求：1．条理清楚、语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范．
2．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名．
3．所提供词汇仅供参考，考生可自由发挥．
4．词数：70词左右．
参考词汇：subjects，take part in，school activities，get on well with，meaningful，colorful．
My favourite school life
My school life has changed a lot since this term．We don't need to get to school early．We begin our lessons at eight o'clock．We can get enough sleep．At school we have at least one hour for sports to relax ourselves every day．【高分句型一】After the second class we do morning exercises．After that we usually kick jianzi or skip rope．In the afternoon，we can do different kinds of sports．Some play basketball，some play football，others run on the playground．
After school，we don't have too much homework to do．【高分句型二】We have lots of free time．We can do what we like．We can take part in many after-school activities．【具体介绍我最喜欢的学校生活】
In a word，we are happier and healthier than before．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：At school we have ①at least one hour for sports②to relax ourselves every day．在学校，我们每天至少要有一个小时的运动来放松自己．
①at least 固定短语"至少"
②动词不定式作目的状语．
高分句型二：After school，we don't have ①too much homework②to do．放学后，我们没有太多的家庭作业要做．
①too much 修饰不可数名词"太多"
②动词不定式作后置定语．

解答 My favourite school life
   My school life has changed a lot since this term．We don't need to get to school early．We begin our lessons at eight o'clock．We can get enough sleep．At school we have at least one hour for sports to relax ourselves every day．【高分句型一】After the second class we do morning exercises．After that we usually kick jianzi or skip rope．In the afternoon，we can do different kinds of sports．Some play basketball，some play football，others run on the playground．
After school，we don't have too much homework to do．【高分句型二】We have lots of free time．We can do what we like．We can take part in many after-school activities．【具体介绍我最喜欢的学校生活】
In a word，we are happier  and healthier than before．【总结全文】

点评 本篇是一篇以提纲提供情景的作文．写作的关键是要抓住文章的中心内容来写，把学生睡眠不足的原因写清楚并提出建议．写作时，要先确定好时态，再注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．避免出现一些词汇及语法上的错误．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．