Question

19．假如你是班长李明，你将安排你班外教的儿子Tom来汉的活动．请用电子邮件告知．
内容要点如下，
1．参观城市博物馆．了解武汉文化；
2．走进课堂，交流学习情况；
3．去东湖划船，欣赏风景；
4．在家举办朋友聚会，品 尝美食；
5．补充一至两点个人想法．
注意：
1．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称
2．词数：60-80
3．内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；
4．邮件的开头已给出．不计入总词数．
参考词汇：City Museum 城市博物馆 The East Lake东湖 view  n．景色
Hi Tom，
I'm glad to hear you'll come to Wuhan．
Wuhan is a beautiful city full of culture and history．Visiting City Museum is a good way to
learn about Wuhan．We can go boating in the East Lake．Enjoying the fascinating views．
Then，we'll invite you to our class and talk about school life．My friends and I will have a
party for you at home．And you can taste our traditional food as well．If possible，you may watch Han Show．Hope you'll have fun here．
L i Ming
Yours
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Wuhan is a beautiful city full of culture and history武汉是一个充满文化和历史的美丽的城市．
full of culture and history介词短语做后置定语，修饰city．
【高分句型二】
If possible，you may watch Han Show如果可能，你可以观看汉秀．
if possible是if it is possible的省略，if引导的条件状语从句

解答 Hi Tom，
I'm glad to hear you'll come to Wuhan．Wuhan is a beautiful city full of culture and history．【高分句型一】Visiting City Museum is a good way to learn about Wuhan．（参观城市博物馆．了解武汉文化）we can go boating in the East Lake．Enjoying the fascinating views（去东湖划船，欣赏风景；）．Then．we'll invite you to our class and talk about school life．（走进课堂，交流学习情况）My friends and I will have a party for you at home．And you can taste our traditional food as well．（在家举办朋友聚会，品 尝美食） If possible，you may watch Han Show．【高分句型二】Hope you'll have fun here．（个人想法）
 L i Ming

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．