题目内容
【题目】根据所给图画和文字提示,用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。
提示词 :放鞭炮 set off firecrackers 雾霾 smog 装扮 decorate
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【答案】One day before the Spring Festival, Xiaotou father and Datou son went shopping, they wanted to buy something to celebrate the Spring Festival. On the way, the father said they should buy some firecrackers, but the son thought setting off firecrackers was very dangerous and it could make more smog. It is bad for people’s health and the environment. The father agreed with him. He suggested they could buy some flowers and grass to decorate their house, the son was very happy to hear that.
【解析】这是一篇看图作文。考试首先要仔细阅读图画内容,根据提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要介绍春节前大头儿子和小头爸爸想买鞭炮庆祝春节的故事,因此一般过去时运用较多。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。当然,写作时尤要注意文章结构的合理,表述的条理性和准确性。
【亮点说明】
该范文结构清晰,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯。尤为突出之处在短语和句子的巧妙运用,如celebrate the Spring Festival;make more smog;agree with;It is bad for people’s health and the environment;the son was very happy to hear that等这些短语和句子的运用也让文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。