题目内容
写作(10分)
根据所学内容,以“My Family” 为题向你的同学介绍你的家庭,你的家庭成员中应有:爷爷.奶奶.爸爸.妈妈.一个叔叔.一个姑姑.两个表弟.一个表妹。(50字左右)。
One possible version:
My Family
Hello! My name is Betty. I have a big family. There are ten people in my family. My grandfather is Tom and my grandmother is Alice. My father is Jack, and he is a doctor. My mother is Lucy, and she is a teacher. I have an uncle Sam and an aunt Patty. I have two cousins, Bill and Tim. I have a cousin, Sarah. They and I are the students. We love each other, so I have a happy family.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,介绍我的家庭。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一和第三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:My name is……,she is…….及 I have……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意文后要陈述自己有一个幸福的家庭。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友的名字,接下来介绍我的家庭成员,最后指出我有一个幸福的家庭。此处用了in my family,each other,a happy family等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
考点:提纲作文。