题目内容
【题目】写作(计20分)
人生如旅,在你的成长过程中,许多人感动着你,影响着你,如:父母.老师.朋友.故事人物…….最佳你市正举行以“The person who has influenced me most”为题的中学生英语征文活动,Spud Webb 深深地影响着你,请根据表中的内容要点完成征文。
| 基本情况 | 1. 个头矮小,梦想进入 NBA 2. 一直为梦想而奋斗 3. 1985年成为NBA球员 |
成功原因 | 1……. 2……. | |
对我的影响 | …… |
要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3)词数:100词左右(征文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4)不得使用真实姓名.校名和地名等。
The person who has influenced me most
The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb.
Spud Webb was born in the USA, in 1963.
【答案】
The person who has influenced me most
The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb.
Spud Webb was born in the USA, in 1963. He was very small, but he had a big dream--- to play in the NBA. He was fighting for his dream since his childhood. As a saying goes. “Where there is a will , there is a way.” In 1985, he became an NBA player.
What led Spud Webb to success? First, he didn’t lose heart or give up even when he was refused to play basketball in the team because of his height. Second, he was able to take every chance. Spud Webb has influenced me a lot. When I face difficulty in my my daily life, his spirit keeps me going and encourages me to take on new challenges.
【解析】
试题分析:本文要求以“The person who has influenced me most”为题写一篇英语征文,介绍著名球星Spud Webb斯伯特·韦伯及其对你的影响。根据要求,短文要从斯伯特·韦伯的基本情况、其成功原因、其对自己的影响几个方面进行写作,要求表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯,思想积极。短文用第一、三人称,一般现在时态。
写作亮点:短文第一段开门见山,开篇点题:对我影响最深的是斯伯特·韦伯;第二段介绍其成长历程,并总结出:Where there is a will , there is a way.有志者,事竞成。主旨鲜明,中心突出;第三段总结其成功的原因,以first, second罗列要点。层次清楚,要点分明;最后用一个带有以when引出的时间状语从句的复合句表明自己向斯伯特·韦伯学习的目标及决心,突出中心,再次点题。