题目内容
书面表达(共10分)
同学们,健康的生活习惯对于成长中的你们是非常重要的。请以My lifestyle为题,从锻炼、饮食、睡眠及其他方面谈谈你的生活习惯以及简单评价你的一些生活习惯是否健康。
要求:
语言表达准确,语义通顺、连贯;
书写工整、规范;
根据所给内容,请做适当发挥;
词数:60词左右。
My lifestyle
How to Keep Healthy
As we all know, it’s very important to keep healthy. But do you know how to keep healthy?
Firstly, I think we must have enough food to keep us healthy. Breakfast is necessary. It gives us energy for morning. We must also have the right kind of food. Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables, but less junk food. Don’t forget to wash your hands before meals.
Secondly, it’s necessary for us to take exercise. Exercise will keep us active and strong.
Thirdly, I think staying up is bad for our health. It we can’t get enough sleep, we may have a headache. We should go to bed early and get up early.
Lastly, listening to music or chatting can also make us feel relaxed.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇根据所给提示写一篇叙事完整,语句规范的作文。这就要求在动笔前要仔细分析所给要求,考虑出正确写作思路。
【亮点说明】这篇文章语言规范,叙事清楚,词汇及时态运用正确,能够把内容叙述清楚,做到了首尾呼应,是一篇不错的文章。
考点:话题作文。
Minoru Yamasaki was a well-known American architect (建筑师). He was born in 1912 in Seattle, Washington. His parents came from Japan. Minoru went to college to study architecture. Every summer he worked in a fish factory to help pay for college. Often he worked from four o'clock in the morning until midnight. He slept in a room with 100 other men. Later in life, Yamasaki remembered these times and was always good to his workers.
Yamasaki sometimes dreamed about his work. Once he woke up at three o’clock in the morning. He remembered a building that was in his dream. He got up and started to draw. Yamasaki used a new design(设计) for the buildings. These buildings are now the Century Plaza Hotel, and Tower in Los Angeles, California.
Yamasaki was different from other architects. His buildings give people a feeling of peace(和平) and happiness. Many of his designs have pools of water, flowers, and windows on the roof to let in light. He always designed buildings to please people. He wanted to give them a place away from the busy ways of modern life.
Yamasaki worked for several companies. But his success began when he started his own company. In 1956, he won the Architect’s First Honor Award for his design of an airport in St. Louis, Missouri. He won two more awards (奖)over the next five years. In 1962, he designed the World Trade Center in New York. It is very famous.
In 1993, a bomb exploded (炸弹爆炸) in the World Trade Center. But the buildings did not fall down because they had a good design.
Yamasaki had strong opinions about his buildings. They had to be built his way. He refused to change the design of his buildings, even if he lost a job.
Minoru Yamasaki died in 1986. He designed more than 300 buildings. People will enjoy the design and beauty of his buildings for a very long time.
The title | A 1. American architect |
Be born | In 2.. in Seattle, Washington |
In college | Studied architecture in college |
Worked in a fish factory to pay for college | |
In a room with 100 other men and often stayed up very late until midnight | |
His design of buildings | Made people feel peaceful and ____3._____ |
Had strong opinions about his buildings | |
The World Trade Center didn’t fall down after a bomb explosion | |
Successful career(生涯) | Was not the same as other architects |
Didn’t begin his successful career 4. he started his own company | |
Won 5. Awards for his famous design before 1962 and designed over 300 buildings in his life | |
Date of death | Died in 1986 |