Question

12．某中文网站提出"走路去上学"的倡议，请你就这一话题写一篇约70词的英语短文．
内容提示：1．走路有利于健康且安全；
2．和同学结伴可以相互了解，相互帮助；
3．不需要父母接送，学会自理；
4．道路上车辆减少，城市不再拥堵；
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要求：1．要点齐全，条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范．
2．文中不得出现真实校名及姓名，否则不予评分．
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥．
参考词汇：be good for，each other，send，no longer，crowded
Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise．Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise．（走路有利于健康且安全） I think it's good for health and it's safe．（同学结伴）When we walk with our classmates，we can talk about something interesting and know each other better．Also，we can help each other．（学会自理）What's more，if we walk，our parents don't have to send us to school．We can learn to look after ourselves．（城市不再拥堵） As a result，there will be fewer cars in the city．Then the streets are no longer crowded．
I hope more and more students will go to school on foot．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一个提纲作文，要求提出倡议"走路去上学"，写作要点有1．走路有利于健康且安全；2．和同学结伴可以相互了解，相互帮助；3．不需要父母接送，学会自理；4．道路上车辆减少，城市不再拥堵；根据写作要点这里用一般现在时，用第一人称，重点词汇和句型有：be good for，each other，send，no longer，What's more等等．

解答 Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise．（走路有利于健康且安全） I think it's good for health and it's safe．（同学结伴）When we walk with our classmates，we can talk about something interesting and know each other better．Also，we can help each other．（学会自理）What's more，if we walk，our parents don't have to send us to school．We can learn to look after ourselves．（城市不再拥堵） As a result，there will be fewer cars in the city．Then the streets are no longer crowded．
I hope more and more students will go to school on foot．

点评 对待此类提纲作文，尤其是文字材料的提纲，切记要逐句翻译，写作前，首先要理清思路，然后选用合适的词或短语，让文意更通顺，例如本文可以用到Also，What's more．等短语和句型，让文章有过渡，有条理．