Question

【题目】同学们，你们正处于初三的冲刺阶段，时间对每个人来说都是宝贵的，但有些同学仍不知道珍惜，经常看电视，上网，玩手机…请你根据以下提示和要求用英语写一篇短文。。

提示：1. What things do students waste time doing?

2. What ’ s the importance of saving time?

3. How can we save time?

要求，：短文包括所有提示，词数60-80。

How to save time

We have ever heard of “Time is money. Time is life. ”

Answer 1

【答案】

How to save time

We have ever heard of Time is money. Time is life. But we can see some students waste time doing something useless everywhere. They spend much time playing computer games, chatting online, watching TV and so on. It’s neesessary for us to save our valuable time. Time is very important to everyone. we don ‘ t save time, we can’ t improve our study. But how can we save time. First, we should listen to our teachers carefully in class so that we can save more time to lean others after class. Second, we can make a plan to study at home. In this way, we can learn more with less time. If we make good use of time, we are sure to make great progress.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用lFirst、Second等词，使得文章非常条理。还使用了一些固定句型如They spend much time playing computer games, chatting online, watching TV and so on. It’s neesessary for us to save our valuable time.等等为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。