Question

【题目】书面表达

日常生活中，我们有多种多样的出行方式，请说一说：你心目中最好的出行方式是什么？请以“The Best Way for Me to Go to School”为题写一篇短文。不少于60词。

The Best Way for Me to Go to School

_Different students go to school in different ways in our class, but I like

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Answer 1

【答案】

The Best Way for Me to Go to School

Different students go to school in different ways in our class, but I like to go to school on foot best.

First, I live near the school, so my home is not far from my school. And it takes me a few minutes to get there. Second, there is a crossing on my way to school，and sometimes the traffic is very busy. I think it’s safer to go to school on foot. Third, I think walking is good for my health. It’s a kind of sport and it makes me study better.

So in my opinion, the best way to go to school is on foot. What about you?

【解析】

试题分析：这是一片话题作文。以“The Best Way for Me to Go to School”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你心目中最好的出行方式。短文开篇介绍每个人都有自己不同的出行方式，然后交代自己最佳出行方式，要用一半的篇幅来阐述原因。写作中要注意运用一般现在时态来描述。注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容简明、扼要地介绍了心目中最好的出行方式。本文结构紧凑，语言简练，层次分明，时态运用的非常准确，复合句的使用“I think it’s safer to go to school on foot. ”，“I think walking is good for my health.”丰富了文章的表达效果，对于七年级的学生来说，能写出这样的句式真是难能可贵。