Question

13．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic"Let's Be Friends of the Earth"．
（以"让我们成为地球之友"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格．）
The questions below are for your reference．（以下内容仅供参考）
l Why should we be friends of the Earth？
l What are we doing to the Earth？
l How can we be friends of the Earth？
（注意：文中不得出现人名/班级等个人信息，否则不予评分）

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
 If we don't protect the land，there will be no land to grow crops．如果我们不保护土地的话，就会没有可以种植庄稼的土地了．if引导的是条件状语从句，在if引导的条件状语从句中，经常用一般现在时来代替一般将来时．
句型二：
Besides，we should take public transportation instead of private cars．而且，我们应该乘坐公告交通设施，而不是开私家车．Besides的意思是"而且，此外"包含后面的事物，instead of的意思是"而不是，相反的"

解答 Let's Be Friends of the Earth
The earth is the only place for people to live．If we don't protect the land，there will be no land to grow crops．【高分句型一】（if条件句） If we don't protect the sea，we'll get nothing from it in the future----no fish or other sea food．So we must be friendly to the earth．We should protect the air，the water and all the animals and plants around the earth．We should also use less paper and plastic bags．Besides，we should take public transportation instead of private cars．【高分句型二】Only when we take the earth as our friend，will it provide good conditions for us to live．So let's be friends of the earth．（说明保护地球的重要性）

点评 考生在写作时，首先要仔细审题，注意人称和时态，要做到内容要点不能有漏落，思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，注意使用比较高级的句法，比如条件状语从句等．