Question

1．大多数的青少年认为在他们的生活当中最重要的人是他们的朋友，请你结合自己的实际情况谈一谈如何交友．
具体要求：
1．字迹要工整．
2．语法正确，语句通顺．
3.60 词左右．
How  to  make  friends
Everyone needs friends．But how can we make friends？In my opinion，we can make friends in the following principles．On one hand，be a good listener．Let people talk about what they really want to talkThat means you understand him．On the other hand，be friendly to people．Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed．In this way，you will have a lot of friends．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
Let people talk about what they really want to talk让人们谈论他们真正想谈的话题．这是一个宾语从句，what they really want to talk是宾语从句．
高分句型二
Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed当朋友遇到麻烦时，尽量帮助他们，因为患难中的朋友才是真正的朋友．这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．里面又有一个because引导的原因状语从句，因为…．

解答 How to Make Friends
Everyone needs friends．But how can we make friends？In my opinion，we can make friends in the following principles．【开头点明主题】On one hand，be a good listener．Let people talk about what they really want to talk【高分句型一，注意宾语从句的使用】．That  means you understand him．On the other hand，be friendly to people．Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed．【高分句型二，注意时间状语从句的使用】In this way，you will have a lot of friends．【正文部分详细介绍如何交朋友】

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