题目内容
【题目】书面表达
下图描述了李华今年春节得到压岁钱(lucky money)之后,他和父母对于如何花压岁钱产生的不同观点。请根据图片提示,用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。
要求:1.完整叙述图片内容。
2.结合自己的实际陈述个人观点。
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【答案】It’s important to save money and put it to good use in life.
After this Spring Festival,LiHua got a lot of lucky money,he and his parents had different opinions about how to use it.His mother wanted him to buy some books because reading can bring him some knowledge and his father thought he should give it away to the poor students in need to get education,but he hope to buy something nice to eat or some fun toys.
Anyway I think he can save it in a bank and then take it out when using it.Also,we should use it to do something meaningful instead of thinking about buying some food or toys .
【解析】试题分析:本篇习作成功地完成了写作任务,表达顺畅,结构连贯,字数符合要求。能够准确运用时态,做到了要点全面,语法正确,上下文意思连贯,还适当发挥了想象。短语的使用使得文章很生动,例如spend…on…,in order to,help them to go to school等。而多种句式的运用则是本文的亮点,例如,The spring festival is the loveliest in China,which is comes in February.;He thinks he should spend lucky money on delicious food.;His father thinks he should give the money to the poor children in order to help them to go to school.。可以说,这是一篇非常优秀的习作。