题目内容
【题目】书面表达
随着互联网的发展，智能手机（smart-phone）已被广泛使用。我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见。请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息,以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题写一篇90词左右的短文。
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弊端 | 影响与家人、朋友的关系（relationship）；容易引发交通事故；对身心健康有害，不利于学习和工作。 |
观点 | 正确利用手机；面对面交流胜过网上聊天…… |
要求：1. 短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当发挥；2. 题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：1. have effects on 对……有影响 2. concentrate on 聚焦于……
3. face-to-face conversation 4. make good use of
Refuse to be phubbers
With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there.
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【答案】
Refuse to be phubbers With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there. Some family members play with their smart –phones while eating with families instead of talking with them. It has effects on the relationship between them. Some people look at their smart-phones while walking even riding or driving. It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents. Some children want to play with smart-phones before sleeping. It’s bad for their health and their study. In fact, face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting on line by phone. Mobile phones are helpful and necessary tools for modern life. But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than Phubbers。
【解析】
试题分析：本文要求按图表提示，以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题作文。短文重点是两个方面，一是现象与弊端：揭示现代人用手机的恶习及其产生的危害；二是观点与方式：告诉人们怎样正确的使用手机，利用好这个现代的通讯工具。短文主要用一般现在时态。第三人称或第一称形式。
写作亮点：短文首先结合现代人使用手机的现象，说明了人们使用手机给生活带来的危害，接着告诉人们怎样正确地使用好手机。条理分明，层次清楚。短文包含了提纲的所有信息，语句通顺，意思连贯。文中用了while doing， instead of, rather than等等结构，给短文增色不少。
【题目】Hip-hop Planet
86 【1】 Countrieslike France, Brazil and even Japan have their own hip-hop culture. But where did this strange speaking-singing style come from? Many centuries ago, in West Africa, traditional storytellers played musical instruments while they were telling stories. When this tradition travelled from West Africa to the USA, it developed into different musical styles. For example, blues and jazz. 【2】 And in the 1970s, there were many poor areas in New York. There wasn’t any money for music lessons in schools, so kids made their own music. Teenagers Afrika and DJ Here played their records outside in the streets. Everybody joined in. MCs had rapping（说唱） competitions. Every week, there were talented new dancers, new DJs and new MCs. Hip-hop culture was born.
【3】 It was 1980. I was at a party in New York. There was a young DJ at the party. He was playing records. While he was putting a record on, a kid picked up a microphone（话筒） and begantapping. Some other kids were break-dancing to the music. It was loud and boring, and I
hated it. I preferred jazz.
【4】 Today’s successful American artists like Missy and her friend Tim heard it on the radio when they were growing up.
The last time I heard hip-hop, I was in West Africa. 【5】 I was going to interview a traditional storyteller when I met a young hip-hop artist, He told me there are hundreds of rap groups in Africa today. We live on a hip-hop planet.
A. I remember the first time I heard hip-hop. B. You can find hip-hop everywhere you go.I was writing a book about African-Americans. C. Many Americans gave music lessons to poor children. D. These styles all started in poor African-American areas. E. During the 1980s, hip-hop became popular all over the USA. F. Some people don’t like hip-hop because of its spoken words. |
