题目内容
3.为了发现并解决同学们学习生活中的心理压力问题,你们班开展了以"Less stress,better life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈缓解压力的好办法.内容包括:
1.同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;
2.我的压力是什么;
3.我是如何成功缓解我的压力的.
注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3.词数80左右,文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Less stress,better life
Hello,boys and girls!
.
That's all.Thank you!
分析 这是一篇提纲作文.内容为以"Less pressure,better life"为主题,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法.时态为一般现在时及一般过去时.人称为第一人称和第三人称.写作要点包括:1.同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么;2.我的压力是什么;3.我是如何成功缓解我的压力的.
高分句型一
My parents want me to be the top student in class.我父母想让我成为班上最好的学生.want sb.to do sth.想要某人做某事.
高分句型二
So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem因此,我认为与父母的谈话以解决这个问题是必要的.think后加上省略了that的宾语从句、it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的,it是形式主语,动词不定式做真正主语.
解答 Less pressure,better life
Hello,boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today's world.Students in our class are under too much pressure.
Some students can't get on well with their classmates,while others may worry about their exams.【要点一:同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么】
I'm always under pressure,too.My parents want me to be the top student in class.【高分句型一】
.So they send me to all kinds of after-school classes at weekends.【要点二:我的压力是什么】
Last Monday evening,I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me at last.【要点三:我是如何成功缓解我的压力的】So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.【高分句型二】
That's all.Thank you.
点评 写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.
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Love
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