Question

【题目】 初中四年的学习生活结束了，想必你有很多话想对你的学弟学妹们说。假如你是张扬，请你给学校英语广播站写一封致学弟学妹们的公开信。内容可以结合你在学习时间、方法，师生相处，遵规守纪，学习与兴趣爱好关系的处理等方面的经验，给他们提出合理的建议，并祝福他们。

要求：1.结构合理，条理清晰，语言通顺，内容积极。可集中论述某一方面或几方面内容，不必面面俱到。

2.词数100左右。信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

请将答案填写在答题卡指定的位置。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear friends,

I’m Zhang Yang from Grade Nine. In a few days, I’ll leave school. I have something important to tell you before leaving.

As students, we are supposed to spend every minute on study or other useful things. And remember :Wasting time is wasting our life. We should listen to the teachers carefully in class and finish homework after class. If we have any trouble, we’d better ask our teachers and friends for help. Our teachers work very hard to help us get good grades. We should respect them even if they sometimes criticize us. We are allowed to follow the school rules because they give us a better school to study. We can do something we like after class. But playing computer games and playing with mobile phones too much is not good for our study. We’d better do something interesting more to help develop ourselves.

I wish you can do well in your subjects and have a happy school life.

Zhang Yang

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求在毕业之际给学弟学妹们写一封公开信，结合在学习时间、方法，师生相处，遵规守纪，学习与兴趣爱好关系的处理等方面的经验，给他们提出合理的建议，并祝福他们。首先要注意书信的基本格式，同时根据自己的表达能力，集中论述某一方面或几方面内容。短文用一般现在时态，第一人称进行写作，可以多用一些should, can等情态动词帮助表达。要注意结构合理，条理清晰，语言通顺，内容积极。

写作亮点：本范文在开头对自己作完简短的介绍后，直奔主题：毕业之际有话要说。接下来就守时、学习方法、尊师守纪、学习与爱好等等方面提了一系列的建议，具体生动。其中be supposed to, had better, should, be allowed to等等结构恰当在帮助了本文的表达。最后一段的祝愿，点明了这封公开信的最终目的，主旨鲜明，中心突出。