Question

7．网上购物已经成为当前一种非常流行的消费方式．人们在网上通常会买些什么东西呢？下面图片表示你的调查结果．请以Shopping online为题写一篇80词以上的短文阐述你的调查结果．
Shopping online
Nowadays shopping online is becoming more and more popular．People canbuy whatever they want on the Internet．We can know from the picture that 30% of the people spend their money on clothes and shoes．The number is the biggest of all.8% of them like buying moive tickets onlinne．The number of people who buy food and books is almost the same．15%buy books and 16% buy food．And it's also a good way for people to buy electrical products online，because they can receive their products at home．18% of the people choose this way．There are also 13% of the people buyingother things online．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：①The number of people ②who buy food and books is almost the same．买食物和书的人数差不到相同．
①the number of指…的数量，谓语动词用单数．
②who作为引导词引导的定语从句，在定语从句中充当主语，修饰先行词people．
高分句型二：And①it's also a good way for people to buy electrical products online，②because they can receive their products at home．人们在网上购买电器产品这也是一个很好的方式，因为他们可以在家里收到他们的产品．
①固定句式It+be+名词+for sb to do sth指对于某人做某事是…it为形式主语，不定式为真正的主语．
②because引导的原因状语从句．

解答 Shopping online
Nowadays shopping online is becoming more and more popular．People can buy whatever they want on the Internet．【点明网上购物已经成为当前一种非常流行的消费方式】We can know from the picture that 30%  of the people spend their money on clothes and shoes．The number is the biggest of all.8% of them like buying moive tickets onlinne．The number of people who buy food and books is almost the same．【高分句型】15%buy books and 16% buy food．And it's also a good way for people to buy electrical products online，because they can receive their products at home．【高分句型】18% of the people choose this way．There are also 13% of the people buying other things online．（具体分析调查结果，人们在网上通常会买些什么东西）

点评 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性．完成提示词时也要符合事实．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．