Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是Tom，是阳光中学的一名八年级学生。上周日你从报纸上看到观鸟俱乐部（the Birdwatching Club）的招聘广告。请你写一封简短的应聘信，介绍自己的情况(见下表)，表示愿意为俱乐部做一些工作，并请俱乐部负责人考虑并尽早予以答复。可适当增加细节，使行文连贯，80词左右（不包括所给的开头和结尾）。

Name	Tom	Age	15
School	Sunshine Secondary School	Personality	honest, humorous
Interests & Hobbies	English and science; love sports; enjoy traveling
Working experience	take care of animals write a report about how to protect wild animals last year
Reasons to join the club	1. … 2. …
Telephone number	010-8255668
Email address	tom@163.com

Dear Sir/Madam,

I read your ad in the newspaper last Sunday. Now I’m writing to tell you that I’d like to join _____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I read your ad in the newspaper last Sunday. Now I’m writing to tell you I’d like to join the Birdwatching Club.

I’m a 15-year-old student in Grade 8 at Sunshine secondary school. My favorite subjects are English and science. I love sports very much and enjoy traveling. I’m also an animal lover, so I love birds and nature very much. I can take care of animals. I wrote a report about how to protect wild animals last year for our school newspaper. I think it is very important for me to do something to protect birds. I will be very happy if I can become a member of your club. You can call me on 010-8255668 or e-mail me at tom@163.com. Best wishes.

Yours sincerely

Tom

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇应用文写作，写一封应聘信。由于给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。结合材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，第一人称，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

写作亮点：这篇短文语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，准确地阐明了自己基本爱好和特长，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息，符合应聘信的格式和要求。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语，包含复合形容词的准确使用为文章增色不少.如a 15-year-old student，I love sports very much and enjoy traveling . it is very important for me to do something学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。