Question

书面表达（共1小题，计15分）

健康的生活方式对我们的影响到底有多大？看看Henry的变化，你就知道答案了。请根据表格内容的提示，以“A healthy lifestyle is important” 为题，写一篇不少于70词的短文来描述Henry的变化。(在作文中要体现形容词的比较级，至少一句话)

Time	Two years ago	Now
Habit	Have much meat and cola	Like vegetables and fruit
Health	Hardly ever exercise; often feel tired	Run every morning; feel well
Study	Weak in all the subjects	Make great progress(进步) in every subject

A healthy lifestyle is important

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

A healthy lifestyle is important to everyone. Henry used to have much meat and cola two years ago and he hardly did exercise. So he often felt tired. What’s worse, he was weak in all the subjects because he wasn’t healthy enough to study well. However, he lives a healthier life now. He likes eating more vegetables and fruit. He runs every morning and he feels better. He even make great progress in every subject. In a word, a healthy lifestyle has made Henry stronger and better.

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达应根据表格信息写一篇短文，介绍Henry两年前和现在的改变，说明健康的生活方式的重要性。写作应注意文章结构和层次，应注意时态的正确运用。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，先介绍了过去，再介绍现在。开头和结尾点明了文章的主旨。本文准确运用时态。文章衔接连贯，运用了what’s worse, however, because, in a word等连词进行衔接。同时，本文中运用了大量的形容词比较级，为文章增色不少。如: healthier, more, better, stronger等。

考点：图表作文。