Question

【题目】写作（注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和师名，否则不得分）

假如你是John Smith, 下周六是你的生日，你邀请你的同学Jimmy参加你的生日聚会。你希望他早点到你家，并带来一些音乐光碟。请根据以上内容写一封邀请函。

Dear Jimmy,

John

话题作文：近来网络上流行一句话：“世界上最远的距离是我在你对面，你却在看手机。”这句话真实反映了当前的社会现象，“手机控”，“低头族”越来越多且呈年轻化趋势。请你以“My opinion on using the mobile phone"为题针对这一现象发表个人观点，并提出改进建议。

提示词：a mobile phone freak 手机控

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jimmy,

Next Saturday is my birthday. I'll have a birthday party at home. I invite you to come to my birthday party. Can you come a little earlier? Please bring some music CDs. I'm sure we'll have a good time.

John

My opinion on using the mobile phones

Mobile phones are widely used these days. More and more people use mobile phones to do different kinds of things, such as chatting and shopping. But they spend too much time on the mobile phones. More and more mobile phone freaks appear. Not only the adults but also the children are members of them.

I don't think it's normal. Watching mobile phones too much is bad for our eyes. We have little time to exercise. It's not good for our health. We pay more attention to it. It influences our study and lives. We have less and less time to communicate with others.

In my opinion, we can do something meaningful instead of playing with the mobile phones all the time. Reading, exercising, visiting friends and communicating with families are also good ways to spend your free time.

I hope people can use the mobile phones correctly.

【解析】

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如have a birthday party，at home，invite sb. to do，a little earlier，have a good time，these days，more and more，different kinds of things，such as，not only…but also，members of，too much，pay more attention to，less and less，communicate with others，instead of等。而More and more mobile phone freaks appear. / We have less and less time to communicate with others.等比较级结构和I'm sure we'll have a good time./ I hope people can use the mobile phones correctly.等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。