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3.Frank是九年级学生,迷上了手机游戏,假如你是他的朋友Tina,请你根据以下材料写-份信给他,并给他适当建议.
1、经常玩手机游戏到深夜,睡眠不足.
2、白天困倦,上课不认萁听讲,成绩下降.
3、父母生气,不再让他使用手机,他感到很难过.
4、建议自拟,不少于二条. 要求:包含所给要点,语言流畅,意思连贯,适当拓展;词数:不少于80词,开头和 结尾己给出,不计入总词数.文中不得出现真实姓名、地名、校名.
Dear Frank
I am sorry to hear that you have quarrelled with your parents about playing mobile phone gam es.Y ou often play mobile phone games till midnight so that you don't have enough time to sleep and you are too sleepy and tired to listen to the teachers in class the next day.You've become weak in your studies.Your parents get angry with you.They don't allow you to use your mobile phone.You are feeling bad about this.
I think your parents are right.You are now in Great 9.You should spend more time on your schoolwork.You should stop playing games.You can use your mobile phone to search for information,and look up new words.Also,you need to communicate with your parents and teachers,and let them know your problems.They will help you.

I hope my suggestions are of great value to you.
Yours
Tina.

分析 这是一篇提纲作文.内容是朋友迷上了手机游戏,要求写信给朋友,给他提出建议.注意信件的格式.时态主要为一般现在时.人称主要为第二人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1、经常玩手机游戏到深夜,睡眠不足.
2、白天困倦,上课不认真听讲,成绩下降.
3、父母生气,不再让他使用手机,他感到很难过.
4、建议自拟,不少于二条
常用到的重点短语:
get angry with sb生某人的气
allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事
spend+时间+on sth花时间做某事
stop doing sth停止做某事
look up 查找
communicate with sb与某人交流
search for 搜索
【高分句型】
1.You often play mobile phone games ①till midnight ②so that you don't ③have enough time to sleep and you are ④too sleepy and tired to listen to the teachers in class the next day.
①till 直到…
②so that引导的结果状语从句.
③have enough time to do sth有足够时间做某事
④"too+形容词/副词+动词不定式"表示"太…而不能…"、"太…无法…".
2.You can use your mobile phone ①to ②search for information,and ③look up new words.
①动词不定式做目的状语.
②search for 搜索
③look up 查找

解答 Dear Frank
I am sorry to hear that you have quarrelled with your parents about playing mobile phone games.
You often play mobile phone games till midnight so that you don't have enough time to sleep(经常玩手机游戏到深夜,睡眠不足)and you are too sleepy and tired to listen to the teachers in class the next day.You've become weak in your studies.(白天困倦,上课不认真听讲,成绩下降)Your parents get angry with you.They don't allow you to use your mobile phone.You are feeling bad about this.(父母生气,不再让他使用手机,他感到很难过)
I think your parents are right.You are now in Great 9.You should spend more time on your schoolwork.You should stop playing games.You can use your mobile phone to search for information,and look up new words.【高分句型】
Also,you need to communicate with your parents and teachers,and let them know your problems.They will help you.(建议)
I hope my suggestions are of great value to you.
Yours
Tina

点评 此为材料作文,要仔细审题,抓住重点,将所给信息条理清楚的表达出来,可使用一些表示顺序的词,使论述更明确,更有层次感.还要注意多使用一些委婉的提建议的句型,尽量使用不同的句型以避免文章枯燥单调.要求语句通顺,语法,词汇,时态正确,书写规范

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