Question

4．"南充是我家，文明靠大家！"作为中学生，我们应积极参与文明城市（civilized city）的建设．请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的短文（开头已给出，不计入总词数）．
1．尊敬老师，对人礼貌；
2．帮助他人，友善待人；
3．遵守交规，过马路走斑马线，不闯红灯；
4．保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，不乱踩草地．
【参考词汇】
respect（尊敬）；be polite to；obey（遵守）；traffic rules；zebra crossing（斑马线）
【要求】
1．短文应包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥；
2．语句通顺，意思连贯；
3．文中不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名；
4．请把文章写在答题卡相应位置的横线上．
Nanchong is now making its effort to become a civilized city．As students，what should we do？
                                           

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
We should also help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us我们也应该帮助那些有需要的人，对我们周围的人友好．这是who引导的定语从句，修饰先行词 those．
高分句型二
When we cross the street，we should walk on the zebra crossing当我们过马路时，我们应该走斑马线．这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．

解答 Nanchong is now making its effort to become a civilized city．As students，what should we do？【开篇点明主题】
We must respect our teachers and be polite to others．We should also help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us【高分句型一，注意定语从句的使用】．Besides，we must obey the traffic rules．When we cross the street，we should walk on the zebra crossing【高分句型二，注意时间状语从句的使用】．And we mustn't go across the street when the traffic lights are red．What's more，we should protect our environment．For example，we mustn't step on the grass and climb the trees．Litter mustn't be thrown everywhere．【正文部分详细介绍应该怎么做】
Nanchong is our hometown．Let's try our best to make it a civilized city．【结尾紧扣主题】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，多阅读此类题材，将词汇归类整理；动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．