Question

【题目】书面表达

76．假设你叫李华，你的笔友Tony写信询问你和同学们的课余活动情况。请根据表格内容(个性、活动及理由)，发挥适当想象，写一篇80词左右的信。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tony,

Thank you for last letter. I’m glad to tell you the afterschool activities of people around me._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tony,

Thank you for last letter. I’m glad to tell you the afterschool activities of people around me.

My friend, Ann, is a shy and quiet girl. She likes reading books because she can share ideas with her friends after reading. Mike is different from Ann. He is outgoing and friendly. He often plays sports at Sports Center which is close to his home. He thinks exercise is good for his health. I’m creative and funny. I like watching action movies in City Cinema in my free time. Because it has the best service and the most comfortable seats.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文属于材料作文，描述你和同学们的课余生活。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如share...with..., be different from, play sports, be close to, be good at, free time等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。