Question

14．近几年，我国实施法定节假日放假，于是很多人赶在这些节假日外出旅游，引发了很多问题．请你就以下现象，发表自己的观点并提出改进措施．字数不少于80字．开头已给，不计入总词数．
1．垃圾满地；2．车多，停不到车，乱停车；3．插队；4．在景区乱涂乱画．
A lot of people choose to spend holidays by travelling．This causes a lot of problems．
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
It's rude of some visitors to cut in line 有些游客插队真是太粗鲁了．
it is+adj+of sb+to do sth某人做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
【高分句型二】
We can choose public transport when going out．当我们出去的时候我们可以选择公共交通方式．
when going out是when we go out的缩写．

解答 A lot of people choose to spend holidays by traveling．This causes a lot of problems．
You can see rubbish everywhere in many places of interest．（垃圾满地）Some sights are filled with cars．There is not enough place for so many cars，so drivers park everywhere．（车多，停不到车，乱停车）It's rude of some visitors to cut in line （插队）【高分句型一】．Moreover，some people are rude enough to write and draw during their visit．（在景区乱涂乱画）I think it's important for people to have good manners．Rubbish must be thrown into dustbins．We can choose public transport when going out．【高分句型二】It's polite to queue for our turn．Everyone should act to keep the sights clean．（改进措施）

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