Question

【题目】在微信上，Jack跟Bruce谈到他跟父母关系不好，并向Bruce寻求帮助。假设你是Bruce．

请根据下面的提示，给Jack回复信息。

要求：

1．表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2．必须包括所有相关信息，可作适当发挥（至少两点）；

3．词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

4．不得使用真实姓名和班名等。

内容提示：

现象	我过去经常跟父母吵架，有时几天不说话
原因	那是父母过分担心我的成绩，给我太大的压力。 而且我不帮父母做家务，也没意识到帮助父母的重要性。相反地，我每天至少花两个小时打电脑
措施	现在我能和父母相处得好。我认为我们应该和父母沟通。 … …

Jack, don't worry ! I didn't get on well with my parents, either.

Answer 1

【答案】

Jack, don't worry ! I didn't get on well with my parents, either. In the past,I used to quarrel with their parents, Sometimes I didn’t speak to them for a few days. One day ,my parents talked with me for a long time and I knew my parents love me deeply. Because my parents was too worried about my schoolwork, they gave me too much pressure， I felt they were too strict and boring. On the other hand , I didn't help my parents do any housework, and I never realized the importance of helping parents. Instead I spend at least two hours a day playing computer . so they were not pleased with me. After the communication, we understand each other better.Now I can get along well with my parents. I think you should communicate with your parents and you can get on well with each other.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇表格作文。首先要审清题目要求：主要是Bruce通过自己的经历来给杰克建议。根据内容可知主要用到过去时态和一般现在时。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色.如:学习中注意总结, used to，On the other hand，the importance of helping parents，get on well with，pleased with牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。