Question

【题目】作文

在青少年的成长过程中，一定有许多的烦恼和痛苦。

A请你根据自己的了解，写出几个你自己或者是身边的朋友经常遇到的问题。

B 请你根据A项中的内容，选择其中的一点或几点写一篇文章，阐述问题产生的原因，自己对问题的看法以及解决问题的方法。

要求：1有真情实感，语意连贯，语法正确；2词数100-120左右。

Answer 1

【答案】High school students have come into a sensitive stage, and their bodies grow so fast and their minds have to keep up with the change. The boys and girls start to realize the gender difference. There will be some awkward moments between them. The troubled adolescent annoys many teenagers, because they have problems all the time. For the girls, they want to look as beautiful as the commercial models, so they go on a diet and struggle with hunger. For the boys, they want to be as cool as the heroes in the TV, so they pretend to care about nothing and go against the school regulations. The troubles teenagers meet are very typical, they can talk to their teachers or go to see the psychologist. They need to take the right attitudes towards these problems, or they will go the wrong way.

【解析】

本篇作文已给出写作要求“根据对自己及身边朋友的了解，写出几个你自己或者是身边的朋友经常遇到的问题。”所以在写作过程中，我们需要先陈述自身存在的烦恼，然后分析产生这种烦恼产生的原因，最后再陈述自己对问题的看法或解决问题的方法，所以写作思路共分三步：陈述问题--—分析原因—--解决办法。写作时注意语句的连贯性，语法和时态运用正确。

本篇就是一篇非常优秀的作文，先陈述高中生现在所处的特殊时期High school students have come into a sensitive stage, their bodies grow so fast and their minds have to keep up with the change.再分类陈述男生女生出现的问题，“For the girls…..” “For the boys……”最后他们应该怎么摆脱这些问题“they can talk to their teachers or go to see the psychologist. They need to take the right attitudes towards these problems, or they will go the wrong way.”