Question

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如今，中学生的学习时间长，压力大。上周我校学生对如何减压放松进行了讨论。大家提出了许多种减压放松的方法。请以How to Get Relaxed为题，根据下列信息写一篇短文。

注意： (1)短文必须包括以下要点，并谈谈自己的看法；(2)词数90左右，文章题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

How to Get Relaxed

Last week we had a discussion about the ways to get relaxed．

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Answer 1

One possible version：

Last week we had a discussion about the ways to get relaxed. Some students thought we could get relaxed by communicating with parents and friends. And we could also go to the movies and go sightseeing to relax ourselves. Other students said they would like to have sports or listen to music to get relaxed. In my opinion, relaxing is important. When we are stressed out, we can’t study well. So we need to relax ourselves. We can do sports, play computer games or listen to music when we are under too much pressure. We can go shopping or take vacations, too. In this way, we can get better grades and enjoy the colorful life.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，介绍了减压的方法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Some students thought…；Other students said…；When we are…；We can…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要叙述减压的好处。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头对如何减压放松进行了讨论，接下来是学生讨论的减压的方法，最后指出减压后的好处，生活和学习都变好了。此处communicate with， would like to do sth， stress out，take vacations, in this way等这些词组的运用和时间状语从句When we are stressed out的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：话题作文。