Question

【题目】【2016云南昆明】书面表达

A. Do small things well

B. I love

要求：

1. 请从所给的A、B两个题目中任选其一作答，分支相同。如选B 题，请把题目补充完整再作答，例如：你可以写“I love my mother”,“I love Kunming”，“I love travelling”等。

2. 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。

3. 文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike, Gina等英文名字，校名统一用Guangming Middle School.

4. 词数不少于60.

Answer 1

【答案】

I love my mother

My mother is of medium build and medium height. She is a teacher with short hair. She is kind and always has a smile on her face. She is the person I love most.

She gave me life and brought me up. She loves me with all her heart without waiting for me to give her any reward in kind. Whenever I have difficulty, I would turn to her for help. Whenever I fall ill, she would take care of me .She would be happy with every little progress I have made. She is strict with me and shows me what is wrong and what is right. She herself sets up a role model for me so that I will become a useful person in the society. Today, I want to say "Thank you, Mom."

When I grow up, I will spend more time with my parents and chat with them. I will help them do anything they want to do. I will try to make them happy.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是在两个话题作文中任选其一进行写作。首先要确定好每一个话题的中心。Do small things well.把小事做好。要给人们讲述的是不能夸夸其谈，要脚踏实地；不能只想干大事，要从小事做起，一步一个脚印的道理。I love ____首先要明确自己喜欢的人或事物，然后讲述出自己喜欢它的是什么，为什么，怎么做等等方面。话题作文一定要围绕话题中心，思想健康、积极，短文要紧扣主题，意思连贯，要注意词汇及句型的选择，做到语言通顺，书写规范。

写作亮点：本文第一段先对母亲作了基本的外貌、性格及职业的介绍，然后点题：她是我最爱的人。其中介词of, with, on用得准确恰当；最后一句的定语从句使本段生动；第二段从多个方面介绍母亲为什么是自己最爱戴的人。本段语言精炼，短语、句型使用准确恰当。最后一句“Thank you, Mom”点明主题，突出中心。第三段简单说明将来感恩父母的方式，言简意赅。短文层次清楚，条理分明，中心突出。