Question

【题目】书面表达

随着网络技术的不断发展,人们传递情感的方式也在不断变化。假如你叫王强,上周你就“使用纸质卡片还是电子卡片?”在班级展开了一项调查。请你给China Daily报社写一封信,介绍此次调查的结果并发表你的观点。

约30% 的同学认为	约70% 的同学认为	你的看法
使用纸质卡片: 1.手工制作,表达真情 2.携带方便,便于保存 3.……	使用电子卡片: 1.信息量大,传递快捷 2.节约纸张,利于环保 3.……	1.…… 2.…… (至少2条)

要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下连贯;

2)必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;

3)词数:100词左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);

4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名。

Dear Editor,

I am writing to tell you about the survey I've made on“Using paper cards or e-cards?”in our class.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Qiang

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I am writing to tell you about the survey I've made on“Using paper cards or e-cards?”in our class.

About 30% of the students want to use paper cards.First of all,they are made by hand and they can show people's real feelings.Second,they are easy to take and can be kept for long.Thirdly,people can read them without computers.

However,around 70% of the students prefer to use e-cards.For one thing,e-cards can carry lots of information and people can send them quickly.For another thing,using e-cards can save paper so that our environment can be protected well.What's more,people can make various designs they like.

I think we'd better use e-cards more to save natural resources.But on some particular occasions,we can also use paper cards to show our real feelings.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Qiang

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我们班的“使用纸质卡片还是电子卡片?”的调查结果以及我的观点。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：About 30% of the students want to……，they are easy to……，e-cards can……，I think……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。