题目内容
【题目】书面表达(15分)
假如你是李华，请根据下面表格提示内容，给你英国的笔友艾米(Amy)写一封电子邮件，向她介绍你的英语老师郭老师(Miss Guo)。
外貌 | 高个子、漂亮 |
喜欢的颜色 | 蓝色 |
个人爱好 | 读书、旅游 |
品质 | 乐于助人 |
荣誉 | 去年教学竞赛(teaching competition)荣获一等奖 |
要求：1. 电子邮件须包含表格提示内容，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数80左右，电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
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【答案】
Dear Amy,
How’s it going? I want to tell you something about my English teacher, Miss Guo.
Miss Guo is tall and beautiful. She has taught us English for two and a half years. She is always in blue, because blue is her favorite color. She likes reading and she also loves traveling when she is free. She is kind and helpful. As a teacher, she is successful. She teaches so well that she won first place in the teaching competition last year. All of us like her very much.
What about your teacher? Can you tell me something about her/him? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇给材料作文，给你英国的笔友艾米(Amy)写一封电子邮件，向她介绍你的英语老师郭老师(Miss Guo)。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头写信的目的想要介绍我的英语老师，接下来介绍我的英语老师的外貌、喜好、品质和荣誉，最后期望早日收到郭小姐的来信。此处want to do sth, tell sb about sth, like doing sth, so…that…, what about, look forward to doing sth, hear from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
【解析】略
