题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你是Emily,来自美国。你的父母在北京工作,你随父母到北京某中学就读,为了让你的同学了解你,请根据下列表格中的信息做自我介绍,向大家谈谈你自己的喜好及其原因。
Name | Reason | |
Band | F4 | good singers |
Book | Harry Potter | magic,exciting |
Music | Light music | quiet and gentle |
Movie | Titanic | beautiful actors,sad |
要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,符合逻辑;
2.结构完整,语法正确,书写工整,卷面整洁;
3.词数:80左右。
【答案】Hello,everyone! I'm Emily,from the USA.I have some hobbies.Let me tell you,OK? I like light music,which is quiet and gentle,and it can make me go to bed easily.My favorite band is F4 in China.Because the singers sing the songs that are energetic,and they are good singers.I like books that are exciting and magic.So Harry Potter is my favorite.I like movies that have beautiful actors,especially Titanic, but the end is sad.It often makes me cry.Now you may know me a lot.Let's be friends.
【解析】
本文属于应用文体,进行自我介绍。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如that和which引导的定语从句,make sb do,light music,favorite band,because,energetic,especially等。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。