Question

【题目】书面表达。（共20分）

假如你是Sandy，想邀请你的朋友Amy来你的新家。请你按照下面的提示写一篇邀请函。80词左右。

要点：

1. 新家离市中心乘地铁半小时远，住8楼，有一个大阳台；

2. 邻居们友好善良，一些志愿者经常帮助人们解决各种问题，生活舒适愉快；

3. 路线：乘地铁到达人民路（Renmin Road），从A出口处出来；

4. 沿着马路走，在第二个十字路口向右拐，会看见一个邮局。我家在它旁边，很好找的；

5. 盼望着见到你。

Dear Amy,

I would like to invite you to my new home. _____________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Sandy

Answer 1

【答案】

【思路导航】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍Sandy想邀请他的朋友Amy来他的新家，介绍他新家的位置和到家路线。结合所给材料可知，本文主要可采用一般现在时，人称为单数第一、三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：It is..., I live..., My neighbors are..., Some of them are..., you can..., I’m sure...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序及逻辑关系。

【参考范文】

Dear Amy,

I would like to invite you to my new home. It is half an hour by underground from my home to the city center. I live on the eighth floor with a big balcony. My neighbors are friendly and kind. Some of them are volunteers, and they often help people with all kinds of problems. I live a comfortable and happy life here.

To get to my home, you can take the underground to Renmin Road. Get out at Exit A. Walk along the road, turn right at the second crossing and you’ll see a post office. My home is just beside it.

I’m sure you can find my home easily.

I am looking forward to seeing you.

Yours,

Sandy

【解析】略

【写作亮点】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了想要邀请Amy来新家，接下来介绍新家的位置、邻居的情况、到家路线等，最后期望早日见到Amy。此处invite sb to some place, from...to..., help sb with sth, all kinds of, get to, take the underground, at the second crossing, look forward to doing sth等短语的正确运用也让文章增色不少。