第二节(满分25分)：
Possible version 1
Students’ Mistakes should Be Corrected by Their Teachers
①Some
people think that children’s learning mistakes should not be corrected by their
teachers. ②Children learn by comparing their behaviors, including their speech,
with more skilled people. ③But in school teachers always point out and correct
their students’ mistakes for them, making the students dependent on them. ④So
children should learn by correcting their own mistakes and helping each other
instead of having their mistakes corrected by their teachers.
⑤This
opinion sounds right but is hardly practical. ⑥In real school learning
situations, especially in learning a foreign language like English, without
teachers’ correction all the way, beginners will repeat their mistakes without
realizing it. ⑦I, for example, liked to use words that are too formal for a
student’s composition. ⑧But I never realizing it until my teachers repeatedly
replaced them with simple words. ⑨Now, I can writer naturally in simple
English. ⑩So teachers should be encouraged to correct their students’ mistakes
as soon as possible .
Possible version 2
Children learn everything by finding and correcting the mistakes. For
example, when they are learning a language, they will compare their language
with other people’s and make some changes if necessary. But in schools,
students never have the chance to correct themselves because the teachers have
done all the things for them. That is why students can not become independent
in schools.
In my opinion, it is right for the teachers to correct the student’s
language mistakes. When I was learning English in junior high school, I always
wrote the wrong sentence “I very much like English” because I took it for
granted that languages have the same word order. Having noticed my mistakes
several times, my teacher, Mr. Li, wrote in my exercise book: English and
Chinese have different word orders. Please use English word order to write
English sentences.” After that, I paid more attention to the word order of
English and I rarely made such mistakes from then on. I should thank my teacher
for correcting my mistakes in time.
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