84..去掉to　　　 85.our---their.

80.allow---allows　　 81.去掉if　　　 82.would 后加not　　　 83.by----with　

76.advantage改为advantages　　 77.was---is　　 78.mostly--most　　 79. working---work

2..只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

There are advantage for students to work while studying at school. One of them was that they can earn money. For the mostly part, students working to earn money for their own　 use. Earning their own money allow them to spend on anything as if they please. They would have to ask their parents for money or for permission to do things by the money. Some students may also to save up for our college or future use.

18. 吉林公主岭三中高三英语第一次月考试卷

第一节　　　 短文改错(共10 小题；每小题 1分, 满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　 Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came back into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashing sound from the back of the house. When I ran out of my room to find out what had happened: a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom.

Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three

　　　　　　　　　 the　　　　　　　　　　　 suddenly

hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and all is quiet.

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 hot　　　　 was

Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high

into the air and some flew out ∧the open window. As I ran out to catch them, big drop of

　　　　　　　　　　　　 of　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 drops

rain began to fall. When I came back into∧ house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried

　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　my/the

very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashing sound from the back of the

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 loud

house. When( \ ) I ran out of my room to find out what had happened: a big tree had fallen

down and broke the top of the backroom.

　　　　 broken

17. 长春外国语学校2010-2011学年第一学期第一次月考高三年级英语试卷

第一节　　 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

　　 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　 删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

　　 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出其修改后的词。

　　 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

9. her--his 　pletely

6. depressing---depressed　 7. but-and　 8.　 talk后加to /with

4. has---have　 5. sleep---sleeping