第一节 基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)
以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容。
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*二手烟：second-hand smoke
[写作内容]
请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯，内容包括：
1 禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围；
2目标和措施
3相关数据。
[写作要求]
只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
[思路点拨]
本次基础写作为应用文中的通讯报道。试题详细地给出了内容要点，为控制性写作。
要写好此文，需注意下列三点：
一是要认真审题，确定体裁、人称和时态等;
二是要运用适当的句型，合理地组织文字;
三是切忌照译，要适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。
2010广东高考英语基础写作优秀范文选登
[优秀范文选登1]
The Chinese government has decided that smoking be banned in indoor public places all over the country.This decision ,which will be carried out from January 1st , 2011, aims to bring a complete smoke-free indoor environment. In order to achieve this goal, no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places.Statistics show that China has approximately 350,000,000 smokers, among whom 75% are men and 25% are women. Around 540,000,000 people are affected by second-hand smoke,causing 100,000 deaths a year.
[优秀范文选登2]
The Chinese government has decided to ban smoking in public places across the country. This decision, which aims to make all indoor public places smoke-free, will come into effect from the first of January, 2011. To this end, no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places.Currently China has about 350 million smokers, among whom 75 percent are men and 25 percent are women. Around 540 million people are influenced by second-hand smoke, which causes 100,000 deaths per year.
[优秀范文选登3]
Our country has begun to carry out the policy that prevents smoking in public buildings since January 1st, 2011. The main aim is to make every public rooms have no smoke by posting the sign of preventing smoking. There are 350 million people smoking recently, in which the male hold 75 percent and the female hold 25 percent. Because of these smokers, about 540 million non-smokers are influenced. More than 100 thousand people per year die because of the second-smoke.
[优秀范文选登4]
The Chinese government has issued a nationwide regulation that smoking is no permitted in public places from January 1, 2011. It required that in-doors public-places must be no-smoking. What’s more, in order to carry it out effectively, putting up signs related to banning smoke was advised by government.
Up to now ,350 million Smokers consisting of 75% male and 25% female are suffering. Among about 540 million people influenced by second-hand smoke, the rate of death is over 100 thousand per year.
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：把缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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TV．It was about the question of traffic in our cities．It
seems that a great deal of damages is done by traffic．
All our cities are suffered from this．Some buildings are
actually falling to pieces．It’s often fast to walk than to go
by car or bus．The problem has been getting worse for long
time．This is only one problem in thousands of others
in our cities. All sorts of terrible things were happening
to our cities．The big problem is“What can we do about
It? ” Our roads were never designing for such a heavy
traffic．It takes longer and longer to get from one place to another．