3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:地震灾区 earthquake stricken area

Dear fellow students,

    A magnitude 7.1 earthquake has killed around two thousand people in the Tibetan Plateau in southwest China ,

       Let’s join hands and do all we can to help those in need!

                              The Student Union

One possible version:     

Dear fellow studnets,

    A magnitude 7.1 earthquake has killed around two thousand people in the Tibetan Plateau in southwest China ,more than tens of thousands of people injured,still more homeless. Faced with this situation, we should do something to help the people in the earthquake stricken area. So the student union proposes as follows:

     First of all, we can donate money as well as necessities such as clothes, text books and so on .At the same time, as a student, learning is of vital importance. Only in this way can we devote ourselves to science and technology, aiming to predict the natural disasters exactly in the future. In consequence, more and more people can survive disasters. Furthermore, try to be a volunteer in the spare time after graduation to serve the society as much as we can.

     Let’s join hands and do all we can to help those in need!

                              The Student Union

 
 
 
 
 
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