假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处错误.每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ).并在其下面写出该加的——青夏教育精英家教网—

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time go by, I found that I could even communicate some college students freely.

假定你是李明，你的朋友Peter 写信向你寻求戒掉网瘾的方法，来帮助他的弟弟，请你在回信中提出你的建议。要点如下：
用引导的方法让他认识到上网成瘾的危害；
向父母或老师求助，帮他限制上网时间并让他浏览既有吸引力又可开阔视野的网站；
引导他说出自己的困惑或烦恼，这样可以找出他对网络游戏依赖的原因。
培养有益身心的爱好来转移注意力。
注意：1. 请不要逐句翻译，可适当进行发挥；
2. 词数：150左右。
Dear Peter,
I feel sorry for your brother’s suffering from the Internet addiction.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

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The idea for Father's Day started in 1909. A woman named Dodd about starting a Father's Day holiday listening to a Mother's Day speech at church. Miss Dodd wanted a day to honor her , William Smart, who had fought in the American Civil War. His wife died when birth to their sixth child. Mr. Smart raised the baby and his other children on a farm in Washington State. When Dodd became an adult, she how kind and loving her father had been while raising his six children alone. She believed her father had worked very hard to make sure his children healthy and strong. As Dodd's father was born in , she chose to hold the Father's Day celebration in Spokane, Washington on June nineteenth, 1910. In 1924, President Coolidge gave his to the idea of a national Father's Day. Then, in 1966, President Johnson signed a presidential statement（总统令） the third Sunday in June as Father's Day.
In early times, wearing was a traditional way to celebrate Father's Day. People wore red roses to fathers who were still living. White flowers were worn to remember fathers who had . Today, Americans celebrate Father's Day in many different ways. families take their fathers out to a restaurant for a meal. Others give their fathers with special messages of thanks. Children living far call their fathers on the telephone to them a happy Father's Day. the holiday is celebrated, the idea is for children to let their father know that he is valued and loved. one historian in America has said, "Lucky is the man who hears many small voices call him father."

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We lived in a very quiet neighbourhood. Early one evening, my wife asked me to go to the          to get some soft drinks. My daughter Holly had just got her           permit, so I asked her to drive my truck for the shopping instead, as a chance of         .
While we were waiting for Holly, my son talked about how much he liked my truck, and I told him I enjoyed having it, too. But I was more or less             about Holly. Just then, we heard a loud noise outside. My son looked out and           , “Daddy! Daddy! Holly … Truck!”
“Oh, my God!”             I ran to the door, I found that the truck had been brought to a stop.
The              had happened in our own driveway. With              experience, Holly had my truck hit our garage wall.             , Holly was unhurt, but when I reached her, she was crying and saying, “Oh, Dad, I’m sorry. I know how much you             this truck.” I held her in my arms as she cried.
I remember how              Holly was the night she had my truck damaged, and how I            her. The repaired truck reminds me of what really        in my life. One day, when Holly            her life, she will certainly know that I love my         a thousand times more than anything else.

A man accused (指控)of failing to return more than 700 children’s books to five different libraries was allowed to get out of prison yesterday after a book publisher agreed to pay his bail(保释金)of $1,000. The publisher said, “ There’s a story here. This is a man who      books. He just can’t      them. He hasn’t stolen a(n)       book. So what’s the crime ? We think that Mr Barush has a story to tell. We plan to      his story.”
When asked why he didn’t return the books, Mr Barush said, “ Well, how could I? They became      to me. I was afraid to return them because I knew that kids or dogs would get hold of these books and chew them up,       them around, tear the        , spill soda on them, and drown them in the toilet.”
He continued, “ Books are people, too! They talk to you, they take care of you, and they enrich you with       and humor and love. A book is a member of my family. How could I kick it        ? I repaired torn pages. I        the dust on them with a          cloth, I turned pages so they could        and get some fresh air.”
“ Every week I        them on their shelves so they could meet new friends. My books were HAPPY books. You could tell just by looking at them. Now they’re all back in the library, on the floors, at the        of all those runny-nosed kids. I can hear them calling me! I need to        them. Excuse me. I have to go now.”