题目内容

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time go by, I found that I could even communicate some college students freely.

【小题1】some改为one
【小题2】there改为where
【小题3】surprised改为surprise
【小题4】were改为was
【小题5】me 改成mine
【小题6】but 改为so
【小题7】practise改为practising
【小题8】去掉from
【小题9】go改为going
【小题10】在communicate和some之间加上with

解析试题分析:短文改错题
【小题1】some改为one;some day是指未来的某一天,次处应指的是有一天,故 some改为one
【小题2】there改为where;考查定语从句,这里的where应该是指代的前面的chatting room,为地点,故there改为where
【小题3】surprised改为surprise;to my surprise是固定搭配,故surprised改为surprise
【小题4】were改为was;the oral English of some junior students指的是一些初级学生的口语水平,谓语动词应用单数,故were改为was
【小题5】me 改成mine;me是宾格,mine是物主代词,意为我的,故me 改成mine
【小题6】but 改为so;此处明显为因果关系,故but 改为so
【小题7】practise改为practising;spend后面加动词的ing形式,故practise改为practising
【小题8】去掉from;learn from 是从.......中学到,而这里表示学到........,故去掉from
【小题9】go改为going;考查with的复合结构表伴随,作为状语,故go改为going
【小题10】在communicate和some之间加上with;communicate with sb.是固定搭配,此处缺少介词,故在communicate和some之间加上with
考点:考查短文改错

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