题目内容
18.假如你是李华,和美国朋友Peter学习互助.他写信给你,提到他最近学习中文取得的进步和遇到的困难.请你回信给他些建议,并谈谈你英语学习的困惑.信的内容应包括:1.克服中文困难的建议.2.目前英文学习的困难.3.表达愿望.
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.3.给出的部分不计入词数.
Dear Peter,
I?m glad to receive your letter,from which I learn you've made great progress in learning Chinese.(高分句型一)Not only can you speak more Chinese than before,but you've been able to catch some TV programs in Chinese.(高分句型二)
And I'm informed that you have some difficulty reading Chinese.Personally,you should learn and memorize more Chinese characters.Besides,you should choose some simpler articles.
As for my English,I'm faced with a new problem.From Book 6,the new words and texts in each module double those in the previous textbooks.Ihope you can give me some advice on how to deal with it,and that your reading will improve greatly soon.(高分句型三)
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假如你是李华,和美国朋友Peter学习互助.他写信给你,提到他最近学习中文取得的进步和遇到的困难.请你回信给他些建议,并谈谈你英语学习的困惑,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:克服中文困难的建议.目前英文学习的困难.表达愿望.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:make great progress取得巨大进步;Not only,but (also)不仅,而且;Personally就…个人而言;Besides另外;As for至于;be faced with 面对;deal with 应对,处理;
I'm glad to receive your letter,from which I learn you've made great progress in learning Chinese.(高分句型一)
Not only can you speak more Chinese than before,but you've been able to catch some TV programs in Chinese.(高分句型二)
I hope you can give me some advice on how to deal with it,and that your reading will improve greatly soon.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your letter,from which I learn you've made great progress in learning Chinese.(高分句型一)Not only can you speak more Chinese than before,but you've been able to catch some TV programs in Chinese.(高分句型二)
And I'm informed that you have some difficulty reading Chinese.Personally,you should learn and memorize more Chinese characters.Besides,you should choose some simpler articles.
As for my English,I'm faced with a new problem.From Book 6,the new words and texts in each module double those in the previous textbooks.I hope you can give me some advice on how to deal with it,and that your reading will improve greatly soon.(高分句型三)(106words)
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.