Question

6．假设你是某高中学生李华，进入髙中之后，你觉得学习英语的方式与初中有很大不同．你给自己初中的英语老师李老师写了一封信，讲述自己学习英语的情况．请你根据下面的提示写出此信．
1．开始学习髙中英语时，觉得比初中所学的要难得多，几乎丧失信心．
2．后来认识到英语的重要性．
3．每天努力学习英语．
4．向老师和同学请教更好的学习英语的方法．
5．现在英语取得了很大的进步，对英语越来越感兴趣．
注意：
1.100词左右；
2．行文连贯，不要逐字逐句罗列要点，注意分段．
Dear Mr Li．
I'm glad lo tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since Ibecame a senior high student．（高分句型一）
When I started senior English in the beginning，I found it much more difficult than ever before and I almost lost heart．（高分句型二）Later，I gradually realized the importance of English，so I worked hard every day，such as reciting and reading as often as possible．I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English．It is their help and your encouragement thathelp me improve my English．（高分句型三）And now I'm getting more interested in it．Thank you so much for your great help．
Wish you all the best．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是某高中学生李华，进入髙中之后，你觉得学习英语的方式与初中有很大不同．你给自己初中的英语老师李老师写了一封信，讲述自己学习英语的情况，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：开始学习髙中英语时，觉得比初中所学的要难得多，几乎丧失信心．后来认识到英语的重要性．每天努力学习英语．向老师和同学请教更好的学习英语的方法．现在英语取得了很大的进步，对英语越来越感兴趣．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：make great progress 取得进步； in the beginning在开始；lost heart灰心丧气；as often as possible尽可能多；get interested in 对…感兴趣；
I'm glad lo tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high student．（高分句型一）
When I started senior English in the beginning，I found it much more difficult than ever before and I almost lost heart．（高分句型二）
It is their help and your encouragement that help me improve my English．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr Li．
      I'm glad lo tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high student．（高分句型一）
      When I started senior English in the beginning，I found it much more difficult than ever before and I almost lost heart．（高分句型二）Later，I gradually realized the importance of English，so I worked hard every day，such as reciting and reading as often as possible．I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English．It is their help and your encouragement that help me improve my English．（高分句型三）And now I'm getting more interested in it．Thank you so much for your great help．
       Wish you all the best．
                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                            Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．