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13．加拿大高中生David在互联网上登出启事notice，希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言、文化．假设你是曲师大附中的李华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文给David发出一封电子邮件．主要内容包括：
①．你怎样得知他的愿望       ②．你愿意成为他的朋友
③．你打算如何帮助他        ④．你盼望他的回复
注意：词数：100词左右
注：曲师大附中the Middle School Attached to Qufu Normal University
Dear David，
I am Li Hua．I am glad to read your notice on the internet and I know you want to make friends with a Chinese in order to learn the Chinese language and culture．（高分句型一）I want to be your friend．Now I'd like to introduce myself to you．I was born in Qufu in 2001，and I study in the Middle School Attached to Qufu Normal University and I am good at English．（高分句型二）
I think I can help you to know about China by sending e-mails．What's more，we can have chats on the Internet in Ch inese or English and I'll tell you the customs，the festivals，the foods and so on of the Chinese．（高分句型三）I hope we can keep in touch with each other．
I am looking forward to your reply．

Yours，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息加拿大高中生David在互联网上登出启事notice，希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言、文化．假设你是曲师大附中的李华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文给David发出一封电子邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：①．你怎样得知他的愿望       ②．你愿意成为他的朋友③．你打算如何帮助他        ④．你盼望他的回复2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：make friends with 交朋友；in order to以便，为了；be  good at擅长；What's more而且；keep in touch with 保持联系；
I am glad to read your notice on the internet and I know you want to make friends with a Chinese in order to learn the Chinese language and culture．（高分句型一）
I was born in Qufu in 2001，and I study in the Middle School Attached to Qufu Normal University and I am good at English．（高分句型二）
What's more，we can have chats on the Internet in Ch inese or English and I'll tell you the customs，the festivals，the foods and so on of the Chinese．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear David，
       I am LiHua．I am glad to read your notice on the internet and I know you want to make friends with a Chinese in order to learn the Chinese language and culture．（高分句型一）I want to be your friend．Now I'd like to introduce myself to you．I was born in Qufu in 2001，and I study in the Middle School Attached to Qufu Normal University and I am good at English．（高分句型二）
       I think I can help you to know about China by sending e-mails．What's more，we can have chats on the Internet in Ch inese or English and I'll tell you the customs，the festivals，the foods and so on of the Chinese．（高分句型三）I hope we can keep in touch with each other．
       I am looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                                          LiHua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．