假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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7．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Compared with traditional ones，self-organized tours are rapidly gaining a popularity among the youth．
During a self-organized tour，arrangements of sightseeing can be flexible and changeable depend on our own interests．Thus，we can spend the time free and head for our favorite destinations directly，only in which way are we fully expose us to the local cultures and customs．
Besides，self-arranged tours can bring about great inconvenience in the arrangements of transportation and accommodation．At the same time，the discounts which a group of tourist can often enjoy in restaurants and hotels may not be available．Also，lack of safety makes easy to get hurt．
In my opinion，the advantages of a self-organized tour seems to outweigh its disadvantages．How a wise choice it is to go on a self-organized tour，that helps us enjoy ourselves to the fullest．

分析文章介绍了自助旅游．和传统旅游相比，自助旅游有很多优点．可以根据自己的兴趣灵活安排，充分感受当地的文化和风俗．组团自助旅游，还可以保证安全．真的很不错．

解答 Compared with traditional ones，self-organized tours are rapidly gaining a popularity among the youth．
During a self-organized tour，arrangements of sightseeing can be flexible and changeable depend on our own interests．Thus，we can spend the time free and head for our favorite destinations directly，only in which way are we fully expose us to the local cultures and customs．
Besides，self-arranged tours can bring about great inconvenience in the arrangements of transportation and accommodation．At the same time，the discounts which a group of tourist can often enjoy in restaurants and hotels may not be available．Also，lack of safety makes∧easy to get hurt．
In my opinion，the advantages of a self-organized tour seems to outweigh its disadvantages．How a wise choice it is to go on a self-organized tour，that helps us enjoy ourselves to the fullest．
详解：
1．去掉a；冠词错误．句中popularity受欢迎，抽象名词，不能与不定冠词连用．
2．depend改为depending；分词错误．句中depend作arrangements的后置定语，要用非谓语动词；depend与主语arrangements构成主谓关系，要用表示主动的现在分词．
3．free改为freely；副词错误．句中free修饰谓语动词spend，要用副词形式．
4．are改为can；情态动词错误．句中expose是实意动词，要用情态动词来构成倒装，表示能够．
5．Besides改为However；副词错误．句意表达的是转折，且句中有逗号分隔，要用表示转折关系的副词however．
6．tourist改为tourists；名词错误．句意表达的组团旅游，要用复数．
7．加it；句型搭配错误．句中make后接形容词+不定式，要用形式宾语，即make it easy to get hurt．
8．seems改为seem；主谓一致错误．句中的主语是the advantages，谓语动词不能用三单形式．
9．How改为What；感叹词错误．句中是对名词choice进行感叹，要用what来构成；how对形容词或副词进行感叹．
10．that改为which；连词错误．句中helps us enjoy ourselves to the fullest修饰tour，是一个非限制性定语从句；从句缺少主语，且先行词指物，要用which来引导．

点评短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．