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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Alice,

I am delighted to hear that you will come to my city for sightseeing.I was writing to you expressing my willingness to make arrangement for your tour.

As for the accommodation,I have the option of either staying in my home or in a hotel,that I can reserve for you in advance if you like. However,I'd like to help you work a travel schedule.In the way,could you do me a favor and purchase a Coach purse though it doesn't bother you?With my mother's birthday approached,I wish to present it to her as a birthday gift.

I'm looking forward to meeting you soon. I hope you will have a fun here.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

【解析】本文是一封信。主要讲述了李华为即将来访的Alice所做的一些准备,以及请求Alice为妈妈带份生日礼物。

1.正在写这封信应该用一般现在时表示。故将was改为am。

2.为旅行做安排,由下文可知作者并非只做了一个安排。故将arrangement改为arrangements。

3.“你可以选择住在我家或者住在宾馆,根据句意,是对方具有选择权。故将I改为you。

4.非限制性定语从句的连接词为which。故将that改为which。

5.根据句意,除了住所之外,我还可以帮你……是递进而并非是转折关系。故将However改为Besides。

6.work out的意思是想出、制定出,和后面连接意为制定出旅游计划。故在work之后添加out。

7.by the way为固定搭配,意为顺便问一问。故将In改为By。

8.“如果不麻烦的话,可否……”此处表假设而非让步。故将though改为if。

9.with +宾语+doing,表主动。故将approached改为approaching。

10.have fun 为固定搭配,玩得愉快,中间无需不定冠词。故将a去掉。

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【题目】阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Peppa Pig

An upcoming film's trailer(预告片)has garnered huge attention on China's social media platforms, with many netizens dubbing the short video as the "best commercial video of 2019".

The 5-minute trailer is advertising the upcoming animated film Peppa Celebrates Chinese New Year, which revolves around the question "Who is Peppa?" and tells a touching story that highlights Chinese families.

In the beginning, a senior man named Li Yubao living in a remote rural area asked his grandson on the phone what gifts he wanted for the Spring Festival, but only heard the word "Peppa" due to the poor mobile signal. Therefore, the man begins an interesting journey to discover who Peppa is.

With the help of neighbors, the senior got closer to the answer, created a Peppa Pig model using metals and his own intuition, and surprised his grandson.

At the end of the story, the man found out Peppa was a cartoon figure and enjoyed the film with the whole family during the holiday season.

(写作内容)

1. 请用30个单词概述上文主要内容。

2. 请用120个词写出:

(1)这个广告预告片的意义?

(2)谈谈为什么老年人希望孩子常回家看看以及我们年轻人该做点什么。

(写作要求)

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

(评分标准) 内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

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