题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Alice,
I am delighted to hear that you will come to my city for sightseeing.I was writing to you expressing my willingness to make arrangement for your tour.
As for the accommodation,I have the option of either staying in my home or in a hotel,that I can reserve for you in advance if you like. However,I'd like to help you work a travel schedule.In the way,could you do me a favor and purchase a Coach purse though it doesn't bother you?With my mother's birthday approached,I wish to present it to her as a birthday gift.
I'm looking forward to meeting you soon. I hope you will have a fun here.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
【解析】本文是一封信。主要讲述了李华为即将来访的Alice所做的一些准备,以及请求Alice为妈妈带份生日礼物。
1.正在写这封信应该用一般现在时表示。故将was改为am。
2.为旅行做安排,由下文可知作者并非只做了一个安排。故将arrangement改为arrangements。
3.“你可以选择住在我家或者住在宾馆”,根据句意,是对方具有选择权。故将I改为you。
4.非限制性定语从句的连接词为which。故将that改为which。
5.根据句意,除了住所之外,我还可以帮你……是递进而并非是转折关系。故将However改为Besides。
6.work out的意思是想出、制定出,和后面连接意为制定出旅游计划。故在work之后添加out。
7.by the way为固定搭配,意为顺便问一问。故将In改为By。
8.“如果不麻烦的话,可否……”此处表假设而非让步。故将though改为if。
9.with +宾语+doing,表主动。故将approached改为approaching。
10.have fun 为固定搭配,玩得愉快,中间无需不定冠词。故将a去掉。