Question

【题目】阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Peppa Pig

An upcoming film's trailer(预告片)has garnered huge attention on China's social media platforms, with many netizens dubbing the short video as the "best commercial video of 2019".

The 5-minute trailer is advertising the upcoming animated film Peppa Celebrates Chinese New Year, which revolves around the question "Who is Peppa?" and tells a touching story that highlights Chinese families.

In the beginning, a senior man named Li Yubao living in a remote rural area asked his grandson on the phone what gifts he wanted for the Spring Festival, but only heard the word "Peppa" due to the poor mobile signal. Therefore, the man begins an interesting journey to discover who Peppa is.

With the help of neighbors, the senior got closer to the answer, created a Peppa Pig model using metals and his own intuition, and surprised his grandson.

At the end of the story, the man found out Peppa was a cartoon figure and enjoyed the film with the whole family during the holiday season.

（写作内容）

1. 请用30个单词概述上文主要内容。

2. 请用120个词写出:

(1)这个广告预告片的意义?

(2)谈谈为什么老年人希望孩子常回家看看以及我们年轻人该做点什么。

（写作要求）

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

（评分标准） 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】A film’s trailer which told a moving story about a senior man from remote rural area making a Peppa Pig model for his grandson made a hit.

The commercial short video encourages people working outside to come back home often and accompany family members to spend a happy and warm Spring Festival holiday, as family bonds play an irreplaceable role in Chinese people's daily lives.

In modern society, which is filled with intensive competition, young men have to work hard so as to forget their parents’ lives. Actually, parents understand their children so much and don’t have so many requirements for them. They just want to have a chat with their children to share the sorrow and happiness in the life, or staying with their children to express silent intimate relationship.

No matter how busy young men are, we should pay more attention to parents’ feeling and life. Therefore, as children of parents, we should suffice their few wishes. Once we are free from work, refuse some social activities, spare time to visit them, talk with them and accompany them. If we visit parents frequently, care more about them, I believe they will feel less loneliness and the world will be full of harmonious atmosphere with love.

【解析】

本篇书面表达是读写任务，要求概述一个广告片并发表自己的看法。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求概述一个广告片并发表自己的看法：1. 请用30个单词概述上文主要内容。2. 请用120个词写出:(1)这个广告预告片的意义?(2)谈谈为什么老年人希望孩子常回家看看以及我们年轻人该做点什么。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；moving (感人的)；remote（遥远的），Peppa Pig model（小猪佩奇模型），encourage（鼓励），accompany （陪伴），Spring Festival （春节），family bond（家庭纽带），irreplaceable（不可替代的），intensive（激烈的），competition（竞争），requirement（要求），harmonious（和谐的）及loneliness（孤独）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。