题目内容
15.下面短文中共有10处语言错误,请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写上该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
If a foreign friend wants to visit to China,the place I'd like to take him or her around is Hangzhou.
I have been to Hangzhou only once; however,I am deeply impressed by its beauty.The West Lake,with a history of more than 2000years,combining naturally with the modern international city.Besides,there are some ancient Buddhist temples locate along the scenic lake,travellers can visit it after rowing on the lake.In addition to the wonderful scene of Hangzhou,they can also have the opportunity to enjoy the best tea,Chinese Longjin Tea,which had ranked first among China's top ten famous tea for centuries.
I'm sure that a foreigner can definite experience the culture of China in Hangzhou.I wish to visit Hangzhou second time with my foreign friend.
分析 本文主要介绍杭州.西湖是杭州的风景点之一,有二千多年的历史,在它的周围有许多寺庙可参观,还有龙井茶在几个世纪里是十大名茶之首.
解答 If a foreign friend wants to visit to China,the place I'd like to take him or her around is Hangzhou.
I have been to Hangzhou only once; however,I am deeply impressed by its beauty.The West Lake,with a history of more than 2000years,combining naturally with the modern international city.Besides,there are some ancient Buddhist temples locate along the scenic lake,∧travellers can visit it after rowing on the lake.In addition to the wonderful scene of Hangzhou,they can also have the opportunity to enjoy the best tea,Chinese Longjin Tea,which had ranked first among China's top ten famous tea for centuries.
I'm sure that a foreigner can definite experience the culture of China in Hangzhou.I wish to visit Hangzhou∧second time with my foreign friend.
详解:
1.去掉to 考查词语用法.visit是及物动词,后直接接宾语,不需要介词to.
2.combining改为combines 考查动词时态.分析句子结构,句中缺少谓语动词,且表示一般事实,要用一般现在时,因主语The West Lake表示单数,谓语动词也应用单数形式.
3.locate改为located 考查过去分词.temples与locate之间是动宾关系,用过去分词短语located along the scenic lake作后置定语.
4.加and 考查连词.前后两个分句之间是并列关系,用连词and连接.
5.it改为them 考查代词.them指代前文提到的some ancient Buddhist temples.
6.scene改为scenery 考查名词.scene指"某地的景色、风景,指展现在眼前的情景,也可以指scenery的一部分",scenery指"总的自然景色或风景全貌".此处应是后者.
7.had改为has 考查动词时态和语态.根据时间状语for centuries,要用现在完成时态,且先行词Chinese Longjin Tea表示单数,从句中谓语动词也应用单数形式.
8.tea改为teas.考查名词复数.tea是可数名词,其前有数词ten修饰时用复数形式.
9.definite改为definitely 考查副词.experience是动词,要用副词修饰.
10.加a 考查冠词.序数词前加不定冠词a表示"又一,再一".
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
A. | that | B. | one | C. | those | D. | ones |
Dennis couldn't stand seeing the dog (38)D.He and his men immediately treated the wound,and gave Nubs medicine.Nubs (39)Abut was still in pain.The next day,the team had to(40)A.Ten days later,Dennis's unit was back,and so was Nubs.He was still(41)D,but the men fed him and played with him.
Before long the unit once again(42)Can outpost (前哨) 70miles away.Nubs,slowly but determinedly,(43)Bthem far into the trackless wasteland until the men lost(44)B of him.Two days later,beyond Dennis's(45)C,he saw Nubs just outside the outpost.The dog had tracked him across 70miles of frozen desert to(46)Cwith the friend who had saved his life.From then on Nubs and the men slept in the same place,and ran around in the same ruins.
Until an order came down from above that they were not(47)Dto have pets,Dennis(48)Ato make sure the dog would continue to live the(49)Blife.So he quickly raised﹩4,000from his family and friends to fly Nubs to(50)B.
A month later,when Dennis and the dog were(51)Din California,at first Nubs didn't recognize the guy.(52)Cwithin minutes,the dog jumped into Dennis's arms,jumping up again and again to(53)Ahis friend's face.
A little(54)Cand concern in the middle of war will not save a violent world.But small stories,like the story of a soldier and a dog,hold a promise of a(n) (55)Bworld.
36.A.mostly | B.certainly | C.hardly | D.never |
37.A.in | B.on | C.at | D.behind |
38.A.stand | B.starve | C.bleed | D.suffer |
39.A.pulled through | B.fell asleep | C.woke up | D.fell down |
40.A.leave | B.rest | C.pass | D.remain |
41.A.hungry | B.tired | C.dirty | D.weak |
42.A.took up | B.took over | C.left for | D.returned from |
43.A.watched | B.followed | C.accompanied | D.barked |
44.A.touch | B.sight | C.control | D.smell |
45.A.ability | B.surprise | C.imagination | D.understanding |
46.A.part | B.fight | C.meet | D.break |
47.A.asked | B.suggested | C.required | D.allowed |
48.A.decided | B.agreed | C.accepted | D.proposed |
49.A.moving | B.good | C.safe | D.interesting |
50.A.London | B.America | C.Iraq | D.Syria |
51.A.found | B.interviewed | C.linked | D.reunited |
52.A.So | B.And | C.But | D.Though |
53.A.lick | B.touch | C.bite | D.clean |
54.A.pity | B.mercy | C.care | D.contribution |
55.A.equal | B.harmonious | C.prosperous | D.amazing |
A. | the salt of the earth | B. | a pie in the sky | ||
C. | the red-carpet treatment | D. | a pound of flesh |
Without computers,learning would be restricted within the walls of institutions.Knowledge and education are being empowered,and the best way to make them accessible to everyone is through computers.Working professionals,stay-at-home parents,senior citizens,even curious minds benefit from online education.E-Learning is accessible and people can afford it.
We all know how learning about the depth of the Mariana Trench in geography class can be a little boring for young children.However,by introducing the audio-visual method of learning,computers have made education interesting.As communication systems enhance,education will change for the better-computers will make our children more curious,because they know that the answers to their questions are at hand.
The Internet is now what once used to be the library.What's more,it is easier to access,along with being a convenient and fairly reliable source of information.
Computers have more or less eliminated paperwork in the administration section of education.Thanks to websites,we can do away with printing brochures,application forms,admission and other administrative documents,resulting in procedures that are cost-effective and environment-friendly.
Unfortunately,computer technology has also brought about easier means for students to cheat on their homework.Since most homework is typed,teachers cannot rely on comparing different forms of handwriting.In addition,students can merely copy work from the Internet.So students should make good use of computers and teacher and parents should monitor and educate them too.
Anyway,there is no questioning over the impact of computers in education; their usage has completely revolutionized the way education is received,communicated and processed.In the years to come,more changes are expected; changes that will further refine the field of education.
Title:Effects of Computers on Education
Facts | The life of an average student is(71 )ruled completely by computers. | |
Advantages | Making E-Learning (72 )accessible and affordable | •the best way to make knowledge and education accessible •making(73)everyone/peoplebenefiting from online education |
Making knowledge (74)interesting | Making education change(75)for the betterand children more curious | |
Being a source of knowledge | (76)The Internet is easier to access and a convenient and fairly reliable source of information. | |
(77)Reducing paperwork | Resulting in procedures cost-effective and environment friendly | |
(78)Disadvantages | Making it easier to cheat on students'homework | |
Measures | Letting students use computers well and be(79)monitored and educated | |
80Conclusion | •Completely revolutionizing the way of education received,communicated and processed •The field of education to be further refined by more changes. |