题目内容
20．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．注意：
1、答案请写在答题卷上；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分；
3、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
4、答题符号、格式要规范：
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
Photographer Michael Muller was a man without fear．He swims among sharks without the protection of the cage to take quality photos of these beautiful creatures．As scary as that might sound，the top predators are at the bottom of his list of concerns．He's usually far more concerning about all the equipments he brings into the water．"The sharks don't really cause any danger，"Muller says．"I don't use cages----I have surrounded by 150to 200sharks，but not once been close to be bitten．"
Using studio techniques in the wild have made Muller's work to stand out in a crowded field of nature photographers．This week his photos are being featured on the Instagram blog．But he is going to upload some new pictures from Mexico，that he's currently swimming with whale sharks．
分析 本文主要讲述摄影师Michael Muller没有保护地在鲨鱼中游泳，拍摄了一些这些漂亮动物的照片．
解答 Photographer Michael Muller was a man without fear．He swims among sharks without the protection of the cage to take quality photos of these beautiful creatures．As scary as that might sound，the top predators are at the bottom of his list of concerns．He's usually far more concerning about all the equipments he brings into the water．"The sharks don't really cause any danger，"Muller says．"I don't use cages----I have∧surrounded by 150to 200sharks，but not once been close to be bitten．"
Using studio techniques in the wild have made Muller's work to stand out in a crowded field of nature photographers．This week his photos are being featured on the Instagram blog．But he is going to upload some new pictures from Mexico，that he's currently swimming with whale sharks．
详解：
1．was改为is 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是一般事实，用一般现在时态．
2．the改为a 考查冠词．是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指．
3．concerning改为concerned 考查固定搭配．be concerned about意为""，是固定搭配．
4．equipments改为equipment 考查名词．equipment是不可数名词，没有复数形式．
5．加been 考查动词语态．I与surround之间是动宾关系，用现在完成时态的被动语态．
6．be改为being 考查动名词．to是介词，后动名词形式，此处是动名词的一般被动式．
7．have改为has 考查主谓一致．主语Using studio techniques是动名词形式，谓语动词用单数形式has．
8．去掉to 考查动词不定式．make后接动词不定式时省略不定式符号to，即接动词原形．
9．But改为And 考查连词．前后两个分句之间是顺承关系，用连词and．
10．that改为where 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词Mexico在从句中作地点状语，用关系副词where．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
It's often heard that love is sharp and hate is sharper，but jealousy（妒忌）is the sharpest as it's love and hate at the same time．It's an emotion which creates negativity，and feelings of fear，anxiety，and insecurity．Jealousy is an ugly green monster which preys on each one of us at different points of our lives．Jealousy is defined as a protective reaction to an imagined threat to a valued relationship，arising from a situation in which the partner's involvement in an activity of with another person is contrary to the jealous person's definition of their relationship．Jealousy is an imperfect blend of sadness，anger，disgust，and resentment．It has destroyed many perfect relationships and caused huge emotional distress to the jealous person as well as his family or friends．Extreme cases of jealousy have even been a cause for murders and suicides．Jealousy is one of the most common human emotions and is experienced by either gender．It is not culture specific and shows its presence from the age of 6months onward．
There are several main common types of jealousy．One of them is workplace jealousy，which is a commonly observed jealousy occurring between colleagues in a workplace．It's often known to turn up when there is a lack of appreciation for the work and efforts made by an employee．Often，there is a general feeling of jealousy between colleagues with similar job profiles，when only one of them gets promoted，or gets a pay raise．This creates a feeling of disappointment and jealousy in the heart of an employee．
Another common type is platonic jealousy．This type of jealousy is often mistaken as romantic，but one must remember that there is a thin line of difference between the two．This jealousy can most commonly be seen in friendships，when one fears losing a friend to a more interesting or friendly person．The emotional attachment with your own friend is so much that you can't imagine them with someone else．Platonic jealousy was aptly shown in the popular comic books called Archie where both Betty and Veronica try to vie Archie．Sibling（兄弟姐妹）jealousy，commonly seen in families across the world，is also one common type of jealousy．
There is a general sense of competition amongst children to be their parent's favorite child．There is a display of jealousy on arrival of a new sibling，on being made to share favorite toys，clothes，or other facilities，on being showered lesser attention，and experiencing lesser love than siblings，on experiencing a negative comparison made between siblings by parents or even when a sibling is smarter or more talented that another．
Jealousy isn't a good thing； fortunately，it's possible to gradually deal with it．This requires initiative（主动性）and full support from the person facing the problem as well as his loved ones．The person himself shouldn't deny the existence of such a problem．As to siblingjealousy，Parents are advised to deal with this problem in a positive way as soon as it is detected，else sibling rivalry can have some serious effects and cause a lifelong rift and tension between siblings．When dealing with workplace jealousy，you should be professional，approach your seniors and demand a recheck of your assessment．Nowadays，organizations are being forced to apply scientific methods of evaluation systems so as to create faimess in assessment．The methods applied have helped justify the assessment results and reduce jealousy between colleagues．
So why get annoyed about your fate and get jealous of others？Love yourself and be assured about your capabilities．Give life your best shot and before your know it，things will start falling in place．
| Jealousy | ||
| General（71）introduction | ◆Jealousy refers to mixed emotions of anxiety and insecurity． ◆People feel jealous with the purpose of （72）protectingthemselves when they feel（73）threatenedby another person． ◆Jealousy can get a perfect relationship （74）destroyedand result in negative emotions． | |
| Common types of jealousy | Workplace jealousy | Workplace jealousy occurs when colleagues get （75）differentlevels of appreciation for their work and efforts． |
| Platonic jealousy | A person is jealous of another person who will（76）replacehim/her as a friend of his emotionally attached one． | |
| Sibling jealousy | Sibling jealousy occurs when you share your things with your siblings（77）unwillingly/reluctantly/passively，receive lesser attention than them or are compared negatively with them． | |
| Tips on（78）handing/tackling/approachingjealousy | ◆（79）Admitthe jealousy and then take action to control it． ◆Make （80）fair/justassessment to reduce jealousy between colleagues． | |
| A． | insured | B． | freed | C． | attacked | D． | struck |
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